Monday, January 31, 2011
Finding the emotion -- sculpturing your words
Writing is like sculpture. Chip away at it long enough and something’s bound to emerge.
Sculptors agree that what they are seeking is in the stone, they just have to get it out. What we writers seek is in our hearts and memories. We must search feelings and information and make them real to our readers.
Rodin’s sculpture, The Kiss is an excellent example of a love scene expressed in marble. Walk around that a few times and you’ll feel everything the entwined couple must have felt.
We write what we know although the story might not be one we’ve lived. In my Tangled Web, the heroine lives a life I hoped my birth mother lived. I used my imagination/muse, even a little in utero memory, to describe her seduction. In unearthing and presenting the scene, I had to revisit the venues with research for physical details, but the emotions are my own—and perhaps my birth mother’s.
Sculpting this book didn’t require a landslide of adjectives. Writing is still show don’t tell. One of our greatest advantages as "artists" is our power of observation. Look around when you’re in the doctor’s office, the airport, or waiting in line. If you make up a dynamic for each group of people interacting, or if you observe one individual, you’ll likely catch their emotions from their body language. I like to make up their stories. In fact, I told a neighbor that I didn’t pay a lot of attention to local gossip. "Don’t bother to tell me about yourself, I’ll make something up." (Usually juicier than the truth.)
Warning: this is not a recommended listening skill when dealing with friends.
All the emotions you’ve felt: love, fear, rejection, angst, safety … are what your characters feel. Much can be shown in a few words with phrases like: He looked down at his shoes; She turned away so he couldn’t see her tears; He slammed though the front door and headed for the stair well. "Stella!"
This brings up a question: Literary writers, fresh out of college, can write of childhood angst. People like Mona Simpson come to mind. Even Jonathan Franzen is still processing his family. But it is the mature look back that holds depth and understanding. When the emotion is fleshed out, the scene is richer. John Jakes said, "Make them laugh, make them cry, make them wait. Most important, make them wait."
After the suspense, the deluge. The reader is weeping with you. Use your marble wisely, find the story inside; bring its soul to light. Your readers will fall in love with you and your characters.
Julie Eberhart Painter is the Champagne Books author of Mortal Coil, Tangled Web, and Kill Fee to be released in October. See Julie’s Web site at www.books-jepainter.com
Also available are The World, the Flesh and the Devil, American Castles and Tahitian Destiny from Amazon and Barnes & Noble. Julie’s nonfiction e-book, From the Inside Out, a volunteer looks at staying motivated, is considered a best seller on the Net.
Saturday, January 29, 2011
Sour Grapes
On a hot summer's day a fox was walking through an orchard when he came upon some tantalizing grapes ripening on a vine overhead. "Just the thing I want," he told himself. Backing a few paces, he ran and leaped to reach the grapes. His snapping jaws just missed the desired fruit. He jumped again and again, but never could gain the grapes. At last he gave up, and walked away saying, "I am sure they are sour."It is easy to despise what you cannot have.
Such a tale speaks of a denial that often leads to self-deception and delusion. These feelings of deprivation can lead to stronger emotions like jealousy and hatred. Some individuals turn the denied want into an object of evil, and then further convince themselves that those who have what they were denied are evil, too. When the object in question is money, power, or another one's love, it seems the conviction based on misbelief comes easier.
Everyone fails, everyone loses at something, everyone feels jealousy and hatred, but most of us get over these feelings. We all have experience, though, with those who become obsessed with their failures. Humans are strange creatures, and readers never tire of reading about twists on the theme of sour grapes.
Writers take the sour grapes of life and squeeze them into a bitter wine that controls a character's mind and behavior. Such characters become especially scary because every reader can empathize with the emotions behind the evil created. These emotions are universal, and life and legend verify we all have good and evil mixed within our psyche. Everyone has doubts about how he or she would behave under certain conditions, or when faced with certain choices. In those instances, humans can become far more frightening than the scariest monster.
Aesop warned us of our foibles, and writers take his warnings to new heights of frightening behavior. It all makes believable, intriguing characters and stories.
Legend claims Aesop was a slave from Ethiopia, but we don't know if he was real or a name given to a collection of preexisting stories. If he existed, he was a master of short fiction, but perhaps as a slave, all too familiar with the vices of humanity. Yet, for us, the morals gleaned from his stories hold just as true today as they did then. They tell us how little we have changed through the centuries. Each of us still fights the same temptations and self-made demons exemplified in sour grapes.
Stone House Farm
Robin Lee Courtright
Friday, January 28, 2011
Pivotal events


Michael W. Davis
For all of us, there are moments in our lives that shape the manner in which we frame the world. These pivot events establish the basis for much of our belief system, sometimes in a good way, sometimes bad. Our political views, fears, internal strength, vulnerabilities; for many they can be tied back to one or more events that eternally set in stone who you are and how you approach your surroundings. It can be a car accident, your first broken heart, some national catastrophe, a person that extended a random act of kindness by changing your tire in the rain; for each person its different.
Last Monday I was watching a movie of a historical event when the emotions and thoughts I experienced at that time flooded back and reminded me of how that week shaped my views. It was the spring of 1969 and I was a seventeen-year-old rutting male. Life was good, I had two part time jobs to buy myself nice clothes so I could impress the ponytail girls in bobby socks and plaited skirts (lord did I love the ladies). My dad gave me a corner of the basement to build my stuff (used to tinker with mechanical things) and one day I was listening to my transistor radio downstairs when they announced the blockade of Cuba to prevent ICBMs in our hemisphere. Prior to that moment, like most teens, I was blind to the world outside our shores in terms of the harboring hate and threat that always exists and is levied against our nation no matter what we do or don’t do.
The events unfolding each day became worse, more frightening, and a topic of discussion everywhere. The hamburger joint, the barber shop, home room in school, the dinner table; everywhere two people made contact the apprehension was obvious in their eyes, their faces. We all became convinced a nuclear exchange was unstoppable. I remember going down into our basement and stuffing foam sealer in every ceiling crack. The family filled water jugs and food supplies in the corner (no Pierre bottled water back then). Everyone in the neighborhood was doing it. Fortunately, the crisis was prevented but even as a strutting teenager, I was affected by that period.
Those emotions governed my support for our military to this day and the recognition that evil will always be a step away from our door. What does that have to do with writing? Well, a good story helps you evolve with the characters as they mature or increase their awareness about themselves, other people, and life in general. In each of my romantic suspense, thrillers, or even my short SFs, I work hard to have the reader share the pivotal moments in the characters life, understand eventually how it shaped their perspectives, and fostered their growth as a perceptive human being in the story.
Is it easy? Sometimes it is depending on how close the event or emotion is to my personal experiences, sometimes it is not, but it all cases it is essential if one is to wrap the reader into your fictional realm and feel as if its not make believe but reality. Even in a 4000 word short, there have to be reflections of character pivotal events so the reader eventually observes, “that’s why she acted that way” or “Is that how I would have reacted?”. To me it is a watermark of more than a good novel, it is elementary to making the reader always want more, to come back and get lost with you as their guide, again and again.
See ya in four weeks.
Big Mike
Michael W. Davis (Davisstories.com)
Author of the year, 2008
Blind Consent, “The answers are buried in the secrets of the past.”
Forgotten Children, “Only Sara knows the truth.”
Tainted Hero, “Sometimes good people do bad things.”
The Treasure, “A lonely heart can impair one’s judgment.”
Veil of Deception, “Sometimes the truth cuts deeper than a lie.”
Thursday, January 27, 2011
A Character Grows Up
Woo hoo! Found, the next installment in Invisible's world, will be released on February 7th.Found is Nikolay's story. When Nikolay first appears in Invisible, he is young, brash, immature. He fancies himself in love with the heroine, Maeve, but it is a puppy love. He isn't willing to fight for her. He doesn't put her first. He is more concerned about his grandfather, Sergei, than his love for Maeve.
It has been a few years, and Nik is now older and wiser. He's ready for love, a lasting love. He's confident and secure enough to stand up for what he truly wants, his family be damned.
That is one of the things I love about series. I love watching secondary characters grow and change until they are ready to be the heroes and heroines of their own stories. As readers, we see that they truly deserve their happy endings. They've went through a lot of loneliness and heartbreak to land the love of their lives. They've fought for their happiness and they'll keep fighting for it.
What do you love about writing or reading a series? Do you expect characters to change over a series, or do you prefer that they stay constant?
Kimber Chin writes sexy contemporary romances. To read about her stories, including some short freebies, head over to http://businessromance.com/
Tuesday, January 25, 2011
Celebrating Robert Burns
Great chieftain o' the puddin-race!
Aboon them a' ye tak your place,
Painch, tripe, or thairm:
Weel are ye wordy o' a grace
As lang's my arm”.
Sunday, January 23, 2011
Passion VS Reason
Well, none of that matters either way. I'm here now and I actually do have something to say! Let me begin!
I've recently come across a few things that have bothered me for one reason or another and thought I'd make some points about them.
I have a friend who has recently been married (congratulations, you two!). He was telling me about how he doesn't see the point in writing anymore, though he had a flippin' cool idea for a story that he started and never finished. I was like, dude, how in the world do you not see a point in it? And even so, does that mean you have to stop? Well, apparently not. Guess what -- he just recently came up with another idea and he's excited about getting started on it. He went back to writing...or so it seems. My thought here? A writer will always be a writer, whether or not there is a point.
Okay, that was one thing. The other thing that's been coming to my attention lately are all the people that put down writers. Seriously, there are a lot of people like that. They don't understand the reason for writing. Then again, these are usually people who've never read a book cover to cover, so their opinions really shouldn't matter but it bugs me, nonetheless. I mean, who is anyone to put down another's passion? I get asked all the time why I write -- on a side note, why I write fantasy is the most often asked question and I'm about ready to wring someone's neck about it -- and I always have the same answer. Because I love it. Because it's my passion. Sure, I'm no Nicholas Sparks or Stephen King, but still. I just love writing. My imagination is never-ending and I sure as heck won't keep it bottled up!
To the putter-downer of writers, the real world, to me, is as empty as your view of writing. You see it as boring. To me, real life is boring. You see it as a waste of time. Uh, to me, sports are a waste of time -- seriously, a bunch of grown men chasing after a ball? That's as immature as it gets, but, you continue to play or watch it as I will continue to write. Because -- as I said before -- a writer will always be a writer.
Passion + Reason ... can they even be put on the same level? What are you thoughts?
Diana Ilinca
Zirconya: The Sage of Aluh'Nehn -- Coming June 2011 from Champagne Books!
http://www.dianailinca.com/
Thursday, January 20, 2011
We Can All Use A Little Inspiration
Jennifer's post below made me think of the difficulty of finding inspiration during the winter months.
It's the most depressing time of the year. At least it is for many who reside several degrees north of the 49th Parallel. The days are frigid and dim, and night comes early. It makes us want to bury ourselves under a dozen blankets, close our eyes and conjure up memories of a sun-warmed Muskoka chair on a gently floating dock while loons call softly from the lake.
Then we open our eyes and jerk back to reality. Who can write in this ghastly environment? I mean, c'mon! It's brutal!
In the past, I dismissed New Years resolutions as a bunch of hooey. We make them and break them every year. But since I began writing, I look at a new year in a different way. I now greet each January with a new opportunity, a new manuscript, a new idea.
Still, it's a tough road. My imagination can only go so far. During these small days, I need more.
When I'm feeling uninspired, I watch movies with snappy dialogue. I pluck another book from my TBR pile and experience another author's world. I put on some kick-ass music and dance around in the living room.
Sometimes that doesn't work. But then I think of all the writer friends I've made in the last four years, and marvel at the successes they have had. I root for the ones still to be published. I root for myself!
What inspires you?
Sandra Cormier is the author of Bad Ice, a hockey romance.
Wednesday, January 19, 2011
Biting Hands That Feed You
Now, of course, all authors have different experiences, but unfortunately, I've been around long enough to remember the start of the POD migration, where stores were inundated with a new format, and many took it in the shorts stocking books they couldn't sell. So, in response, stores enacted draconian rules about the types of books they'd stock and bring in for signings. Sadly, this shut out a lot of local authors with smaller houses from being stocked on shelves and allowed in for signings. Some stores have even began charging authors money to hold signings if the book doesn't meet certain requirements. Others simply turn the authors away (again, your mileage may vary).
It's always seemed odd to me that stores don't enact a consignment deal with these authors. The store makes 40% without any cost involved with stocking books, the author gets to come in and sell books, the author's friends and family (and anyone else who is interested in the book) peruses the store and may in fact spend money on other items in the store. I'd think this would be a win-win for the store, no matter what.
But back on topic...the thing about most authors is they're avid readers, and will spend a lot of money in a bookstore buying books to read.
However, a funny thing happens when you shun local authors, basically telling them their book (and by extension, the author) is not welcome in your store. They stop going into your store and spending their money (or at least, they cut back considerably). The stores have therefore amputated a major source of their cash flow, and now those same authors are turning to the internet to promote their books. Is it really any wonder that brick-and-mortar bookstores are now losing money and facing bankruptcy?
Personally, I say what goes around comes around...
As always, interested in your thoughts!
***

T. M. Hunter has always had a fascination with interstellar travel and beings from other worlds. Twice a top ten finisher in the P&E Readers Poll for his short stories (2007, 2009), his two books HEROES DIE YOUNG and FRIENDS IN DEED have become fan favorites. His Aston West short story collection DEAD OR ALIVE from ResAliens Press is now available, as well as a brand new Aston e-novella, SEEKER. For more information, including links to his published short stories and novels, please visit AstonWest.com. You can also find T. M. Hunter on Twitter, Facebook, and MySpace.
Tuesday, January 18, 2011
Inspiration

Music and Writing
I've found myself changing music types as I write. It's more than a book or character having a musical genre. Even scenes will demand certain things play in the background. Music also seems to help when I should be writing but can't quite get in the characters' heads. I can put on a particular type of music and I'm there. If I'm writing a creepy scene, the music must follow. I know of a few other authors who use music as inspiration. I will share a few of my favorites musicians.
Poe (A very large part of Liar, Liar)
Apocalyptica
Kerli
Metallica
Evanescence
Godsmack
Bond
So how about you? What inspires you?
www.JLMcCale.com, JenniferCloud.com
Monday, January 17, 2011
Here Comes the Sun
~Jude Johnson
www.scorchedhawkpress.com
Sunday, January 16, 2011
A Juggler, A Moron, and the Serious Writer
Saturday, January 15, 2011
You Can't Make Up The Crazy Things People Will Do
I find the news to be a great source for storyline ideas. You can’t make up some of the crazy things people do. I wanted to share with you some unusual headlines from reputable newspapers I came across in my research.
*Police Seek Drag-dressing Car Thief
*Man in Superman Cape Stole Truck
*Crash Blamed on Vomiting Dog
*Three Charged in Bridal Shower Brawl
*Murder, Adultery, Witchcraft! Buffalo’s Shocking ‘Scandal of the Century!’
*Teenager Guilty of ‘Vampire’ Murder
*Dead Body Mistaken by Neighbors as a Halloween Display
*US woman found guilty of killing her husband by squashing him
The woman actually sat on her husband and suffocated him! If I wrote that in my novel readers might think the plot line was too far fetched, but it is actual news. I find human behavior fascinating and I am addicted to true crime shows. Feeding into my fascination of studying why people commit crimes, writing Bolt Action was thrilling. Secrets of the past, murder, mystery, revenge, deception, sexual tension, and the “State Quarter Killer”; Bolt Action offers it all.
Come on, share a crazy headline you’ve seen. You can also contact me through my website at www.victoriaroder.com
Friday, January 14, 2011
ON GROWING UP
Another’s point:
The artist’s mind can be an amazing thing. Leonardo Da Vinci wrote,
“Every man at age three is half his height.”
Does that not amaze you that a man who dealt with spatial relationships looked at maturation in those terms?
Zi’s point:
The question of maturation has been one that has been asked forever. When am I grown up? What ruler should be used? What are the identifiable markers? I have given this great thought and have concluded, why grow up completely? The greatest times are when the inner child within us is allowed to play in life or has life. I contend that we should mature, though never becoming a complete adult until the day we die.
Angelica's point:
Maturation is inevitable, each of us taking our turn in the various stages of life. We can't get around it, we can't avoid it, age calls to us, beckoning us forth on this infinite string of events. And, when young, we never wish to slow it down. We run freely into the future, gobbling up every glimmer of maturity, seeking adultness. Yet do we ever really let go of our core youth? I don't think so. When I look deep into an elderly person's eyes, I see the boy, the girl that they once were. Our younger selves never quite go away.
I wanta grow up, I wanta be old!
With that I erupt, "Youth is gold!"
My call goes on, "Enjoy every day.
Sing each song. Let the child play."
What about you? Does your inner child still call you to play?
We'd love to hear from anyone interested in what we do. Anyone who writes us at angeliahartandzi@yahoo.com and leaves an s-mail address, we will send you a gift and add you to any future mailings.
Angelica Hart and Zi
KILLER DOLLS
SNAKE DANCE
CHASING YESTERDAY
angelicahartandzi@yahoo.com
angelicahartandzi.com
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Thursday, January 13, 2011
Keep fanning my muse
But there's another motivator, one that I didn't really consider until just recently. The fan. Yep, fans will spur me on like no other. When someone tells me they enjoy the book, I feel my heart swell and pride reign supreme. And when they ask when my next is coming out, I want to hug them tight.
That simple question has the power to make my fingers fly over the keyboard. My most recent book, The Keeper of Moon Haven is the beginning of what I hope will be a long running series, but I had no intention of seriously working on the sequel until this summer when I could really dig my teeth into the story. But this story has generated three fan letters so far, letters that make me seriously want to finish the sequel quicker than my intended target date. To that end I've been writing every night. No - I'm not making large strides, but I am progressing and with each word, I get closer to the end. Will I finish before summer? Doubtful, but I do think I'll move faster on this one that I first suspected and all because someone asked me how soon the sequel would be released.
A writer writes mostly for the love of writing, but without readers to appreciate their efforts, a writer will never become a beloved author. So - thank you to all the readers in the world.
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
The ups and downs of reviews
Book reviews. They can be an evil detriment to your promotional efforts or the key marketing piece to make your story a bestseller. One person can love your masterpiece. Another can hate it.In fact, for one of my stories, one reviewer wrote, “…it picked up towards the end and became rather sweet and romantic…” while another bemoaned, “…by the ending portion of the story, she sadly offers less in the way of evocative detail…”
Subjective much? Definitely.
I’ve learned to take it all with a grain of salt (at least, I hope I have). But even so...seriously, how can a person not just squeal in excitement when she receives a five-star review and prevent herself from sharing it with everyone she knows?
I have no idea. And that’s why I’m very proud to share not just one, but TWO five-star reviews I received for my story, Hot Commodity, given by CataNetwork Reviews and Joyfully Reviewed.
Thank you! Thank you very much.
Link : Single Titles
Star Rating: 5 Stars
Reviewer: Emily
“Olivia Donovan has only sought one thing from her mother, her love and acceptance, which she has never received. When Olivia’s mother brings her to Vegas wanting her to seduce and marry Cameron Banks, she has had enough and decides to find a man, any man, to marry her on the Vegas strip in retaliation. Olivia finds a man who is attractive, drunk, and willing to marry her the only problem is that when she wakes up in the morning to her new husband she finds out it is Cameron Banks himself.
Cameron Banks barely remembers the events of the night before when he wakes up to the stunning blond next to him. When Olivia confesses who she is, both agree on an annulment. Some things are easier said than done and when Cameron comes to Olivia’s rescue the annulment doesn’t become such a high priority for them.
Another fantastic story from Linda Kage, Hot Commodity is wonderful story that touches you when you learn the past of both Cameron and Olivia. I loved the way that Cameron, ever proving the bad boy, sweet talks Olivia. A treasure of a read.”
Link : Joyfully Reviewed
Star Rating: 5 Stars
Reviewer: Vanessa
“Olivia Donovan's mother puts evil in "Evila"! She is willing to sell her daughter to the highest bidder to get whatever she thinks she needs or wants no matter who gets hurt. Olivia is tired of cow towing to her mother and her demands. She has finally realized that she can't make her mother love her by doing everything she wants or demands of her. Now her mother wants her to trap an "elderly, widowed, alcoholic" into marriage so that her mother can benefit businesswise. As her one and only act of rebellion, Olivia has decided that she will go out of her way to find a "young, alcoholic" to marry and send mommy dearest's plans out the window. Only Olivia discovers that she truly screwed that up!
Cameron Banks is the president of his own company and he has some harsh demons to fight. He is sitting at a bar when the hottest woman he has seen in a long time comes strutting in. Cameron is thrown for a loop when the beauty asks him to marry her, but being under the influence of alcohol seems to have diminished his capacity for thought, and he agrees to the marriage.
Hot Commodity was a delightful surprise! I wasn't sure if I was going to like the whole premise of the story but I found myself enjoying the ride. I liked the dynamics of Cameron and Olivia and the way they dealt with each other as well as healed the wounds that were deeply engraved within one another. The whole realism of the characters problems weren't glossed over and pushed to the side. They began the healing with one another but when they realized it couldn't be completed with each other - outside help was found. Hot Commodity was truly an engrossing book which had you rooting for the characters.”
Tuesday, January 11, 2011
What About the Book Cover?

Which led me to think about book covers, some of the great covers and terrible covers I've seen. In fact there have been surveys done repeatedly about what draws the reader to a book first. The answer is always the cover. But I think a survey of readers would also say a book cover ought to give a hint as to the genre of the book. I'll admit to exceptions, because there is always an exception. If the author is well known for writing a specific kind of book, the cover only needs to display the author's name in large letters. An example - If you pick up a book today with Steven King's name on it, you know you're going to be reading a thriller. Kathleen Woodiwiss wrote romance, so her name on a book, meant the book was a historical romance. But originally, the covers needed to say, this is a romance, or for King's books, a thriller.
But what if a particular author writes in a totally different genre? The cover ought to hint this is not the kind of book the author usually writes. Today, with the thousands of electronic books available on internet, I think covers are even more important. Back in the 'old' days, when you had to go to the bookstore, or library to select a book to read, you could pick up a novel, read a couple of pages and decide if you wanted to read the book or not. The cover might not even matter. Today, it's a little more difficult. An author has to depend on the cover to first entice a reader into taking another look. The cover displayed on the 'net' has to draw the reader in, so the cover artist has a critical job to do for the author. Take a look at the books for sale at Champagne Books. The covers give you a great indication of what kind of book you will be reading because Champagne Books has superior artists. You know by the cover that it's a comedy, a thriller, science fiction, or romance.
So, to my talented cover artist, Trisha, thank you! My cover does a perfect job.
Sunday, January 9, 2011
So Happy to Be Here!
I want to get my time in the Vineyard off to a good start, so I'm going to lead off with a give-away. One lucky commenter will get a $15.00 gift certificate for the Champagne Books Online Bookstore. And since my book isn't out yet, you're not obliged to buy it - just pick any of the great books Champagne has out right now. (But I hope you'll come back next Fall for mine!) The rules are the standard kind of thing -- a comment will be chosen at random and announced in my post next month. Don't forget to check back and find out if it's you!
So, with the bribe to get you here out of the way, let me introduce myself: to begin with, I'm a voracious and eclectic reader - if it involves words in a row, I'm all over it. I started reading, according to my mother, when I was three. I'm not sure about that - I can't ever remember not reading. My mom, bless her sweet Baptist heart, thought that anything you read in a book was good for you, so she got special permission to get me a library card years before I was officially eligible. And then she'd send me to the bookmobile every other week, with complete carte blanche on my choices. She had to call the librarian a few times to tell them I was not to be censored or directed to the "Little Folks Corner." Yes, I read Peyton Place when I was ten. I didn't really get what all of it was about, but I knew it was scandalous. I ate it up with a spoon!
I was the youngest, and only girl, in a huge tribe of cousins living out in the wilds of North Florida. Think the Kennedy compound, but with Southern accents and no money. I spent a lot of time alone, and I amused myself by making up exciting little scenarios involving handsome princes, mad-eyed pirates, the Monkees, and me. It was the late 60's, after all. I never lost the habit of creating fantasy worlds even when grown-up responsibilities closed in. If I got bored writing a brief or sitting in a ballet school car pool line, I would act out conversations and incidents in my head. Sometimes I wrote them down just for my own amusement. But gee, I wasn't a writer -- it was just a weird thing I did. Writers are, you know, important. Famous. Not to mention wealthy. Right?
Because of my career as a family and criminal law attorney, I gravitated more and more toward romance. Lots of lawyers develop substance abuse issues; happy-ever-afters became my drug of choice. After spending my days dealing with crisis and despair, every evening found me at a rout or a foxhunt, flirting with a rakish nobleman with a mysterious secret. Oh, yes, Victoria Holt taught me everything I know about life! Lucky for me, I managed to find a guy who, while not exactly Lord of the Far Island, is a darn good Lord of the Junior College Library. I wouldn't trade him for anything, not even Colin Firth in a hot tub. (Well, not permanently. I'd send Colin home after a while.)
A series of odd coincidences convinced me that the little bits and pieces I had stashed in stacks of old journals and legal pads might be the beginning of an actual story. Then, having heard me throw a book aside and mutter, “I could write something better than that,” my husband bought me a laptop and said, “Do it.” Actually, I think the exact quote was, “Do it or shut up about it,” but anyway, the result was the same. And now I stand here, a soon-to-be-published author. That means important, famous and wealthy are due any day now. Right?
So now the Lord of the Junior College Library and I live on NW Florida’s beautiful Emerald Coast with our two teenage daughters, who are mortified by the stuff mom writes. (I figure that being mortified by your mother is a rite of passage, and writing just makes it easy for them to find something to be upset about.) I work as general counsel for a local government agency, and I do all the normal middle-class mom stuff. When I’m grocery shopping in my crocs and sweat pants, you’d never know the lurid scenes I’m plotting in my mind. But at night, alone with a scented candle and a cold glass of pinot, Arabella, my wild, bodice-ripping alter ego comes out. I hope y’all like her.
(And if anyone noticed the odd attempts to get this posted, please forgive me. I am technologically a bit backward, but I can be trained. Will do better with future posts.)
Saturday, January 8, 2011
The Worst Anyone Can Say
First off, unless your contract allows you to get author copies at 50% off retail price or less, you are not - repeat, not - going to clear a profit on print books sold through bookstores. That is fact. So you have to ask yourself what is the most important reason you wrote your book and signed your contract - to make money, or get your work out to the public?
If it's the first: unless you are Stephanie Meyer or Nora Roberts or Diana Gabaldon, etc; published with a major publisher; or wealthy and savvy about independent publishing - adios muchacho, you ain't gonna like what I have to say. When you have to pay 70% of the retail price to buy print copies of your book and the best you can get from a bookstore willing to sell your book is 60%, um, even someone as totally number-phobic as I am can see the math will not work out in your favor.
So let's go with the alternative: You want to see your book in print and have signings at bookstores. How, you ask? Ask, I say.
Yes, it is that simple. And the trick is to adopt this mantra: (say it with me now)
The worst anyone can say is no.
Independent bookstores are your friends. Whenever possible, buy from them. Recommend them to your friends. Get to know the managers and owners. The longer these people stay in business, the better chance you will have a place to sell your work. The downside to this is that you are only going to get 60% of the retail price for each copy sold. Sorry, that's the way it works. And if they want you to pay them to carry copies or hold a signing - Run away, run away! Can you say scam? I knew you could!
However...You can sell your book yourself at events. Check out Church Craft Fairs, Festivals, conferences, Red Hat meetings, Rotary Club meetings... depends on what YOU are comfortable with. Look for other authors in your area who may be willing to share tables/costs at conferences or Book Fairs.
Any book clubs in your area? Oh definitely get into those if you can - tell the group to order directly from Champagne; you won't have that 70% initial outlay and you'll still be paid royalties.
And here's a fun fact: When you sell copies yourself, you can offer your book at a "discount" off the retail price and still clear your cost. Anything 15 -20% off is attractive, and still gives you a little bit of profit.
Reviews in the local paper help but be aware that some of them demand a free copy of your book that will not be returned. Ask if they can do reviews from the ebook format and you'll be happy to send them any version they need for free. (PDFs usually work best.)
Donate a copy to the local library and offer to hold a discussion about your research or subject matter. Look for sci-fi cons or local fantasy clubs, maybe even Renaissance Fairs. Tea shops, coffee shops, hospital gift shops...some of them allow their managers some leeway in purchasing from locals. Again, that might pay only 60% of retail, but it possibly gets your book bought in places others' aren't.
Does someone get murdered in your tale? How about talking to mystery buffs and mystery shops/bookstores? Do you know anyone at the local community radio station? Offer to talk about your subject matter or how you came to sit down and write. They have hours of airtime to fill, and trust me, they want anyone new and different. Wherever you speak, have copies on hand or postcards that say how to order the ebook formats. I've been stunned that sometimes the staff wants to purchase books!
Yes, your internet presence is marketing that translates into print book sales, so keep those blog posts and guest bloggings and all that going. Post events of where you'll be to speak and sign. You'll be amazed that people actually make an effort to come and meet you!
Why did you write your story? What passion compelled you? Use that passion, share what made you work so hard to tell that tale the best way you could. So many people have a story to tell but they are too afraid of failure to even start. You can honestly inspire someone to read your work just by telling what got you off the couch and over to the keyboard.
I won't lie to you. This is a lot - A HELLUVA LOT - of work. Personal pounding the pavement type work. Swallowing your shyness and walking up to the manager of a bookstore isn't easy at best and at times is terribly frustrating. Rejection can lead to dejection pretty darn fast. I absolutely abhor obnoxious sales pitches and refuse to constantly stand there yelling, "Buy my book!" But I have forced myself to mention it when I've heard people talking about a subject I've researched. If they seem genuinely interested, I give them my card and tell them they can read excerpts on my website. I've been stunned at friends of friends of friends who come up to me with a beaten-up business card and tell me they've been wanting to meet me. Me? Yeah, ain't that a kick?
And yes indeed, you'll have times when you sit there and nobody buys. Have a card or bookmark ready with how to buy the ebook version and hand those out. Don't let non-sales get you too down; after all, Miz Scarlett, tomorrow is another day.
Remember, your book doesn't have an expiration date. It's not going to rot and smell bad in a few months. It takes time to build a market, build interest, build demand. Hang out with people who recharge your batteries, be positive and engaging, and just remember:
The worst anyone can say is no.
Hope this helps...
~Jude Johnson
Author of DRAGON & HAWK due April 2011 from Champagne Books: www.champagnebooks.com
My website: www.scorchedhawkpress.com
Friday, January 7, 2011
Resolutions, Promises, and Living Forward

It’s a new year. I pretty much decided I am not making resolutions for the coming year. I rarely keep any of them and then end up feeling like a weak failure. Why set myself up like that? I’ve yet to talk to anyone who has made a New Year’s resolution and followed it through to year’s end.
But I’m not entirely the New Year’s Scrooge. As a matter of fact, I’m determined to make this a very Happy New Year. I’m taking lessons from a few of the characters in my books. Emmie Steele (Next Time I’m Gonna Dance) would tell me to take time to dance, to not live with regrets. Rylee Morgan (Shooting Into the Sun) would say, “Don’t let fear and sadness shape your life. Don’t be afraid of change.” And Trish Garrity (Love, Sam) would tell me to own who I am and let the love of others propel me forward into life.
Wise advice, I think. Instead of resolutions I won’t keep, I’ve made New Year’s promises. I promise to always look for the positive, to relish in the small victories—no matter how seemingly insignificant. I promise to allow myself to do absolutely nothing for at least a few hours a week. I promise to believe in my writing, even in those times when it seems no one else does. I promise to not forget those who gave me a hand up in this business, and to do the same for others. I promise to take not one single breath for granted.
What promises have you made yourself for the coming year?
~*~
Linda Rettstatt is a multi-published author of women's fiction and contemporary romance. Her novel, Next Time I'm Gonna Dance, has finaled for a 2011 EPIC e-Book Award. In addition, Linda is one of six authors who have been nominated for Author of the Year for 2010 at Champagne Books. Read excerpts and reviews at http://www.lindarettstatt.com/
Wednesday, January 5, 2011
The High Cost of Print Promotion

Tuesday, January 4, 2011
Contest - A Way Back
This rhinestone airplane pin resembles the one Wellman Hathaway gave Amber Mathis as a memento of her barn storming experience. The pin in the story is diamonds. Alas, I could only afford rhinestones, but it's a cute pin and would look nice on a ladies lapel or hat.Amber Mathis, a Wall Street investment banker, returns to her office after burying her mother. Distraught, tired of the rat race, she's determined to make a career change. In the elevator she falls and rises to find herself in a vintage lift. The date is February 25, 1930, and a man stands on the window ledge in her office ready to jump.
Wellman Hathaway, owner and CEO of Hathaway Bank in New York struggles to pay his depositors half their losses. A woman claiming to be from 2011 appears in his office and involves him in a scheme that forces them into marriage. With Amber's knowledge of the financial history of the 1930s, they travel to the oil fields of Texas to recoup Wellman's funds.
Two people from different centuries are thrown together to survive a difficult time. Will they find more than A Way Back to prosperity?
Happy Reading and Writing!
Linda
www.lindalaroque.com
Monday, January 3, 2011
Branding, we’re not talking cows here
Branding? What is it? I wanted to know more about the term and its use since it apparently applies to us and our writing, not just large corporations.
Definition: Voice? Plot? Values? Reliability: that I will wind up the details of my twists and turns in the plot.
Ah-ha. Branding is me. My integrity combined with my interests and values create my brand, because who I am contributes to and is incorporated into what I write, whether it’s a travel essay, a blog or flash fiction.
But how does my brand apply to my three Champagne novels?
In the contemporary Mortal Coil, a widow with a ten-year old daughter tries to save her nursing home residents from the Ponytail Perp. The cop assigned to the case and she become allies friends, lovers, and more. Brand: sweet romance, family values, sense of responsibility and altruism. Trust the author to wrap up the details.
In Tangled Web, an innocent woman is seduced by what we would now call a player, but in 1935, was a user, a selfish rogue or a philanderer who takes no responsibility for their child. She rebuilds her life and moves from his influence to become a nationally known… Brand: Romance, grit, suspense and eventually sweet romance and the reliability that the author will not only wrap up the details but will not commit any anachronisms.
Coming in 2011: Kill Fee is so named because it involves an environmentally sensitive article that strays into a murder plot and cover-up. Editors want it pulled, thus requiring that they pay the author a kill fee—in more ways than one. No one is innocent. The all too possible story reflects back on the writer and her entire life. By her side is her attorney, with no agenda but to be her helpmate. Sweet romance, loyalty, family values, humor and whimsy wrapped up neatly and logically.
All my writing has commonalties. People have told me, "I found myself agreeing with your article before I saw your name at the end." Or, "I thought that might be yours."
Ellen Smith, our Champagne Books publisher pointed out to me that although the term Branding has been around for several years, newer writers are becoming more aware of it. This is why your Web site must reflect your brand, not just your latest or your favorite book. As Ellen said, "That way, when someone says (your name) they know exactly who they are talking about.
"Branding is especially important when building an author’s platform. It’s what brings your readers to you," she stated.
This makes perfect sense when you consider how we wait to experience the next book by Nora Roberts, John Grisham, Clive Cussler, Dean Koonz or Stephen King, to mention only a few. They are reliable brands in their own genres.
Build your reliable brand and display it on your Web site. You don’t own it; you are it.
Julie Eberhart Painter is the Champagne Books author of Mortal Coil, in which she practices both medicine and law without licenses, and Tangled Web, a story close to her heart. See Julie’s Web site at www.books-jepainter.com The World, the Flesh and the Devil, American Castles and Tahitian Destiny are available from Amazon and Barnes & Noble. Her nonfiction e-book, From the Inside Out, a volunteer looks at staying motivated, is considered a best seller on the Net. Watch for Kill Fee, Coming in October 2011.
Sunday, January 2, 2011
*Queue Tom Petty music*
There’s the wait to hear back on your query. The wait to hear back on your partial then the wait to hear back on the full. Now if you are among the few lucky percent, the wait for the contracts. You eagerly await the edits…then the 2nd round of edits….sometimes a third. YOUR COVER ART!!! Squee!!! Then e-release then finally, if your novel is long enough - PRINT!
I just got to this stage and I have to say there is nothing like holding your book in your hands and having people ask you to sign it. But wait… there more...
Now there’s the quest to find places to host signings. Watch your e-mail waiting to hear back to see when and if someone will allow you to sit at their store. Then there’s scheduling long weekends away from work. And if you’re nuts like me, booking flights.
Complaining? Not. On. Your. Life. Every step has been a journey and I’ve learned a little with each step. All the torture that the waiting brings – it also comes with a great reward. Like waiting to open up that Christmas gift! It’s worth it and then some in the end.
I just like to shout out to my publisher once again for the chance she gave me and making “the waiting” a sweet agony!
June Kramin
Author Paranormal Romance – Dustin Time
www.junekramin.com
Saturday, January 1, 2011
A Champagne Toast

So as the year changes, chill your bottle of bubbly and carefully pour a glass for you and your company. May you toast to the past without sadness or regret and future with hope and cheer. For my part, with my glass raised, I salute all books published by Champagne Books last year, and in all previous years, and greet with anticipation and pleasure all those books due to launch in 2011. I give thanks for publication of my romantic suspense, Stone House Farm, and look forward to finishing my next story with the hope of publication. Are not grapes and vineyards wonderful metaphors for goals and dreams? Happy New Year!



















